Condense the 'practicing lying' scenes - Have Laurel change more throughout.
Tuesday, February 7, 2012
To Do List 5.2.2012
WING WOMAN - scene of watching Tom fail with Jen after first interview.
Make Jen seem more real? - give her a few more not-annoying quirks / specifics?
Have Laurel give Tom a nickname (something like 'sport') that he calls her at the end, she calls him compadre, yay!
Make Jen seem more real? - give her a few more not-annoying quirks / specifics?
Have Laurel give Tom a nickname (something like 'sport') that he calls her at the end, she calls him compadre, yay!
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